Monday, June 28, 2010

desrpitive writing

A potato is my best vegetable friend. It is brown and tasty it has big spots it is fat and looks like a person. It is wrinkly and squishy and it white once you peal of the skin.


Self assessment: I described it well but i would need to be a bit longer

2 comments:

  1. Nice story next time write more

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  2. You have used some really good and interesting vocabulary in this writing Liam. I think that you can write a lot more than this, and I will be expecting more next time you write.

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